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NOTRE DAME IS IN FLAMES
By Eric Sollars
An expelled young thief, his architect buddy, and Sister Teresa discover Charlemagne's ancient crown in Notre Dame and must evade crooks to deliver it to the French president and the Archbishop.
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Okay.. I know the Main Characters. Inciting incident is the discovery. The Action - how to avoid the crooks. - Stakes - Successful delivery to the FP and Archbishop. Very good. Note: I prefer to comment rather than rate.