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Emma, a young woman recently returned to her hometown of Newville, needs to find out what happened to her father who mysteriously disappeared. The town has become notorious for its legends about UFO sightings and the sudden disappearance of some of its people, spurring Emma to look deeper into the issue and uncover the shocking truth behind these tales.
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Newville, 2018. The Festival of Lights has just recuredd in the small town of Newville. Every year, visitors from far and wide take part in the event, bringing money to local businesses. Tame smiles on shopkeeps' faces hide an underlying edginess - this festival also sparks conversations about UFOs - something few are keen to talk about.
Emma Courso is all too aware of the rumours. At 26-years-old, Emma lost her father to a mysterious light which appeared over their town and only got worse when more loved ones went missing during the festival season. The government authorities led by Federal Agent Stephanie Loid have no official record on the subject despite growing disappearances pointing towards a much darker reality than fanciful folklore can promote. Faced with this horrorific truth, Emma must use all her strength and friends' support to overcome this frightening case and find out what happened.
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thank you very much for your contribution my friend !!
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Liking it. Reminds me of a Stephen King novel i read years ago. Good job
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thank you very much!!
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Congrats Carlos. I'm sure you and Stanley will make a great team.
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Now, that's a pro pic! Great smile, my friend... I dig the logline. Way to work. I'm proud of you for not backing down to my suggestion. You're gonna be alright... 10 years ago, I thought real life details meant something in a logline. They don't. Here's my other thoughts:
When her father vansihes, his daughter searches for answers only to discover the deadly truth about the town famous for flying saucers.
INCITING INCIDENT... When her father vansihes,
FLAWED HERO... his daughter
OBJECTIVE... searches for answers only to discover
STAKES ...the deadly truth about the town famous for flying saucers.
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Thank you very much dear friend of mine!
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