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A mockumentary set to follow a rag-tag group of train station employees as they live out their workdays with oddities and shenanigans, all under the watchful eye of their eccentric boss Maggie.
SYNOPSIS:
Pilot Episode- The employees of Newbury Station introduce themselves and manager Maggie is on the hunt for a petty thief.
Was funny and I enjoyed! Would look forward to future episodes
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The gentle coastal breeze plays & becomes tangled in her hair. Leafing her notebook open, we settle on a page titled, ‘Public Transport’. Neat, capital letters writing, skipping every other line & some open gaps with procrastinating, fish & boat doodles across the top & down the side of the page.
Mindscaping, she begins poking her pencil, eraser end down, around her various body parts, like a personal fat test.
S R CLARK (struggling writer)
Sincere intentions, meaningful coincidences, endless obstacles. . .
Intersecting story lines, mysteries tangled in uncertainty & suspense.
You’ve always had the power Dorothy, to find your way home again.
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