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A thirty-something African-American, who is a cynical entrepreneur and workaholic, discovers that understanding numbers is easier than navigating the modern-day dating scene.
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After being ridiculed by his family and business partners for being a loner, Kevin, a thirty-something African-American entrepreneur of a data analysis firm, decides to focus on his personal life and tries speed dating and online dating with disastrous consequences.
A chance encounter with an attractive account executive from a firm trying to secure a contract with his company leads to a whirlwind romance and a realization that a real relationship differs greatly from fantasy but, in the end, can be more rewarding.
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Cute story idea. I'd work on the title though as well as the logline. I thought, at first, you were talking about 3 different people.
Hello Gregory,
My name is James Adam Tucker, I am an actor and a filmmaker.
I read your logline for THE NULL HYPOTHESIS
on Stage 32, I would like to read a longer summary of the script.
Thank you
James
James Adam Tucker
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