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NEVER BEEN
By Valerio Buccino

GENRE: Historical, Fantasy
LOGLINE:

During the first part of the World War II something happened on US territory that nobody could explain

SYNOPSIS:

When Germany declared war on the United States, the American east coast presented itself as a vulnerable target for the German U-Boot, but not only: this situation was underlined by the resounding success achieved by the submarines of Dönitz with Operation Paukenschlag, but not all the attacks were aimed at convoys of ships and not all submarines were German, one was Italian on a mission with the aim of penetrating the bay of new york and sowing panic by means of a secret weapon embarked.

Valerio Buccino

Thank you for your rating: of course synopsis goes on, but I don't want reveal all at this time, screenplay can also represent a prequel of a television series

Nathaniel Baker

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Valerio Buccino

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Tasha Lewis

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Pattana Thaivanich

Interesting!

Pattana Thaivanich

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Deborah Wagner S.E.

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Frank Baruch

Hey Valerio. Really cool premise! I think you can substitute a lot of your synopsis for your logline because you have all the basic tenants to wet our beaks with. Maybe try this? (During WWII, an Italian submersible crew braves the unthinkable in an attempt to sow panic and bring destruction to the New York mainland, by means of a secret weapon.)

I'd love to see this on the big screen!

Nate Rymer

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