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Romeo and Juliet fall in love during the riots in Ireland - one is Green, the other Orange, not a good combination in 1975.
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Logline should suffice - read first 20 pages - the quality of the writing will determine whether you feel compelled to continue reading - you know this, so, it's only 20 pages.
I share writing credits with Phil Keys on this screenplay - he has the original in his own screenplay section - I rewrote this in 3 weeks - it's an example of the work I do, you can compare the two scripts, discern any difference, perhaps I can do the same for you, cheers.
Sorry about some of the format issues, had a problem with Celtx, help desk not very helpful, rectified now, I've changed to Final Draft which I found vastly superior, cheers.