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A normal day for some mobsters becomes a living nightmare for two young men.
SYNOPSIS:
Jack and Lenny are two young men who live their lives working every week on their nine to five job but then, everything change.
On an usual Friday night when they like to drink a couple of beers and forget their long week, something happens and changes that routine into a nightmare. They see a couple of mobsters killing someone.
With this event, Jack and Lenny accidentally become part of a world that was not made for them. A world of gangsters and death.
A unpredictable connection with Jack's past turns him even more determined and angry to do something about it.
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Hey Duarte. I love the title. The logline however is OK. Here's a suggestion. Two men witness a mob hit and are mistaken for fellow gangsters. The harder they try to escape the deeper they get involved in the underworld, until a connection with their past forces them into a full battle with the Mob." Just a suggestion. Oh BTW. Check your spelling and grammar in your synopsis. Congrats and good luck bro.
Good title. Not a bad effort
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