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How about this for a logline, John Curry: "After their daughter is kidnapped, a working-class couple must risk everything—including their innocence—to get her back." I just made little changes."
After reading that logline again, I'm not sure how the "including their innocence" part pays into the story. Do you have a synopsis?
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How about this for a logline, John Curry: "After their daughter is kidnapped, a working-class couple must risk everything—including their innocence—to get her back." I just made little changes."
After reading that logline again, I'm not sure how the "including their innocence" part pays into the story. Do you have a synopsis?