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HIGH BELIEFS
By Mike Heff
Roommates engage in a prank war with supernatural consequences.
SYNOPSIS:
Goose convinces Fred to help him prank their famous roommate Dylan who claims to be a UFO abductee. Things go awry when Dylan sabotages his own career and gets kidnapped by government agents. Goose has to rally the house together to save Dylan before his big lie turns into a big mess.
HIGH BELIEFS
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Just my opinion, unexpected consequences doesn't close the loop, Just my two cents, change to "that results in serious, scary Government Intervention." That would fit in with your synopsis.
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I would just mention what sparked the prank war.
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Well first of all as Henry Kana said "unexpected consequences" doesn't really work and no hint or peak at what the consequences are, and "that results in serious, scary Government Intervention." does sound much better with your logline. Great work Henry Kana