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LEGACY TWO - ORIGINS

LEGACY TWO - ORIGINS
By Danielle R Erlich

GENRE: Sci-fi, Fantasy
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When a bullied teenager seeks refuge by an Irish castle, he travels to a magical world he never knew existed, and where his father is king. But the king is missing, and it's up to the son he abandoned to rescue him..

SYNOPSIS:

“Legacy” is about a teenager named Lachlan that learns he is anything but ordinary. After being beaten and bullied on graduation day, Lachlan goes against his mother’s wishes and visits an ancient Celtic castle near his home in Dublin. There he begins to write in his journal when there is an earthquake. Lachlan is hit on the head and loses consciousness during the quake. He is then sucked through a portal. When he awakens, he is in a magical world called “The Garden.” There he meets Atlas the Centaur. Atlas explains that Lachlan’s father is their king and only abandoned his family in order to protect his son from an ancient prophecy. The prophecy is that a half human, half royal, magical child (Lachlan) would be born. This would lead to a great battle between good and evil. This war could result in the complete enslavement of all creatures, both human and magical. If good should not prevail and evil triumph, all would be lost. Lachlan’s father returned to the magical realm to try and prevent the prophecy, and protect his wife and son. When his king is kidnapped, it prompts Atlas to retrieve Lachlan from the human realm. Lachlan must find the courage within himself to rescue the father he barely knows, and marshal good against evil in order to save us all.

LEGACY TWO - ORIGINS

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Varshawn Harris

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William Gunn

Great Idea, Great Story and Great Writing!

Nick Taylor

This is a great story! My only trepidation is that the whole "kid being bullied" cliche seems way over done.

Nick Taylor

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Danielle R Erlich

Thank you so much! I had to spend a bit of time on the bullies to show what they are like because they will come back as the saga continues. Lachlan will have to face them in one of the installments. It's his baptism of fire. I'm hoping you know what that means. I'd be happy to explain if you don't though.

Nathaniel Baker

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Danielle R Erlich

Thank you!

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