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DANCING WITH LIFE
By Gayle Lee

GENRE: Drama
LOGLINE: After her son, Eric, is killed in a car crash, Julie sees his ghost. A couple of days later, she gets a visit from a man from her past who claims Eric directed him to her house. Eric stays earthbound for almost a year to comfort his mom. He needs to hear Julie say she will be okay before he will cross over. Julie is convinced by other people that she should let him go. She finds her way to the people and things that aid in her healing while realizing that Eric is never very far away. Dancing With Life is based on a true story.
Timothy Christopher Teemal

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Timothy Christopher Teemal

liking the premise but the logline seems a bit much. "A woman struggling with the death of her son, remains connected with his spirit. Convinced that she must help to let her go, she is aided in her task., in her healing, by those closest to her." Just a suggestion having not read the script. No offence ok?

Gayle Lee

My own brother didn't believe the story either. I am not easily offended at this point.

Florica Cimpoies

I am moved profundly by this logline. Humanly, and sincerely , in professional way intrigued to know all the story. And to see it on the screen. It is in my opinion much more compelling than the usual loglines that all starts wit ''When...''' I hope you wil make it!

Gayle Lee

Thank you, Florica.

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