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The lone survivors of a helicopter crash in the Thai jungle, an unassertive housewife and her injured teenage daughter battle the elements to find their way back to civilisation while being hunted by armed poachers and an angry tigress.
A decent logline, Armelle. Clearly sets out your main character, clear conflict, setting and stakes. I assume the real story is about the unassertive mother growing and becoming more assertive in order to be able to get them to safety?
Hi Phil,
yes, that's indeed the story! Thanks!
Compelling, but I doubt a story of this magnitude could be told on a 5 - 10$ million budget.
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