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THE BIRD MASK

THE BIRD MASK
By Mike Johnston

GENRE: Horror
LOGLINE:

A cynical ad executive obsessed with finding his birth mother turns to a charismatic sideshow performer, who forces him to confront his own darkness in a mansion filled with endless temptations.

SYNOPSIS:

The Gothic thriller, "The Bird Mask" is a complex and layered story that effectively blends elements of psychological horror, dark fantasy, and allegorical storytelling. Its greatest strength lies in its ability to use the supernatural and the surreal to explore deep, universal human themes.

The story follows Keen, a manipulative digital advertising executive, who encounters Tarquin, a mysterious and sinister mentalist. Keen hopes Tarquin can help him find his long-lost birth mother, but gets drawn into Tarquin's dark mind games.

The story's structure, with its interwoven subplots and gradual revelations, keeps the reader engaged and constantly questioning. The use of puzzles and riddles not only adds to the mythic, fairytale-like atmosphere but also serves as a metaphor for the psychological journey of the characters.

The screenplay creates an unsettling, dreamlike atmosphere as it reveals that Tarquin is some kind of demon who lures people into his mansion to feed on their souls by exploiting their deepest desires and insecurities. Keen and Tarquin are depicted as dark reflections of each other, both masters of manipulation.

The plot twists keep coming as the story jumps between Keen's surreal experiences inside Tarquin's mind, and the "real world" scenes of Lilith, Keen's business partner, uncovering the dark truth behind Keen's origins. The ultimate revelation - that Tarquin is Keen's father who raped his mentally ill mother - is disturbing and makes their psychological battle deeply personal.

In the end, Keen outwits Tarquin at his own mind games and traps the demon inside his own mind. But it's a dark victory, as it's implied taking Tarquin's place has forever corrupted Keen, transforming him into a similar soul-feeding monster.

One of the most effective elements of the storytelling is the mirroring between Keen and Tarquin. Their similarities serve to blur the lines between hero and villain, suggesting the potential for darkness within us all. "The Bird Mask" employs it with psychological depth and nuance. It's a testament to the power of the Gothic genre to illuminate the human condition, to confront us with our deepest fears and desires.

THE BIRD MASK

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