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BLESS HER HEART
By Story Tiles Media

GENRE: Romance, Comedy
LOGLINE:

A weight management specialist, from Philadelphia, puts building her life with a serious boyfriend and lifelong friends on hold to take a job in a small southern town dying of obesity related illnesses. 

Tasha Lewis

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Kevin Johnson

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Lorilea Johnson

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Lorilea Johnson

I think this has potential. It's a good concept if the script is written well. I'd keep it moving at a fast pace. Keep it full of funny moments. If it moves slow, it could come across as corny.

B A Mason

This Logline has far too much fat on its muscle in my opinion. My take:

When a bariatrician finds herself drowning in student debt, she puts her Philadelphia life on hold to take a job in a small southern town dying of obesity-related illnesses.

B A Mason

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Nathaniel Baker

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Story Tiles Media

BA Mason. Thanks for your suggestion. I'm starting to want to cut things down to your suggestion but I want to take out the student debt info.

Nate Rymer

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