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Citizens come to the aid of a Latino man and little girl when a cop asks for identification, but what happens next is a crying shame.
SYNOPSIS:
Juan is walking with nine-year-old Maria and is stopped by a cop, asking for identification. Jenny leading, a crowd forms to come to his defense. The cop lets them pass to avoid a situation. Juan takes Maria to a hotel and pimps her out to Fat Bastard.
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