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By Omnia Algaml
When some people want to break some rules in their city so that life becomes more civil within their religious community.
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Omnia Algaml - You've got some great ideas. I would consider adding a protagonist and stakes. Here is a template I use that helps others understand the story. “After ______ (the inciting incident/the event that sets the plot in motion), a _______ (an adjective and the protagonist's position/role) tries to _______ (goal of story) so/in order to ________ (stakes).”