GENRE: Drama
LOGLINE:
A prominent businesswoman seeking redemption from her past, goes on a whirlwind journey, writing a book about unlikely strangers.
Hi, Connie Rankin. Interesting concept. I think the logline needs some work though.
Here's a suggestion: "After ____________ (the inciting incident/the event that sets the plot in motion), a prominent businesswoman seeking redemption from her past ____________, writing a book about unlikely strangers."
I would explain the journey she goes on instead of saying "goes on a whirlwind journey."
Hi, Connie Rankin. Interesting concept. I think the logline needs some work though.
Here's a suggestion: "After ____________ (the inciting incident/the event that sets the plot in motion), a prominent businesswoman seeking redemption from her past ____________, writing a book about unlikely strangers."
I would explain the journey she goes on instead of saying "goes on a whirlwind journey."
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