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SOMEWHERE UNSEEN
By Connie Rankin

GENRE: Drama
LOGLINE: A prominent businesswoman seeking redemption from her past, goes on a whirlwind journey, writing a book about unlikely strangers.
Maurice Vaughan

Hi, Connie Rankin. Interesting concept. I think the logline needs some work though.

Here's a suggestion: "After ____________ (the inciting incident/the event that sets the plot in motion), a prominent businesswoman seeking redemption from her past ____________, writing a book about unlikely strangers."

I would explain the journey she goes on instead of saying "goes on a whirlwind journey."

MB Stevens

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