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THE LAST ROBOT OF VENUSIAN

THE LAST ROBOT OF VENUSIAN
By Nathaniel Baker

GENRE: Sci-fi
LOGLINE:

Venusian a captivating world where the
bustling space station serves as a microcosm of life's complexities,
amidst the interplay of humanity and technology.

SYNOPSIS:

"Venusian" introduces readers to a captivating world where the bustling space station serves as a microcosm of life's complexities. Amidst the interplay of humanity and technology, the elderly man's quiet anticipation and the mischievous laughter of children paint a rich tapestry of urban existence. Jonathan Clack emerges as a central figure, navigating the intricacies of family, ambition, and societal expectations. His interactions with Mr. Edward hint at deeper layers of intrigue and ambition, setting the stage for a journey fraught with challenges and revelations.

As Jonathan embarks on his voyage to City One, the narrative teeters on the cusp of uncertainty, leaving readers eager to unravel the mysteries that lie ahead. The juxtaposition of advanced technology and timeless human emotions adds depth to the story, inviting readers to contemplate the nature of progress and its impact on society.

Throughout the narrative, themes of ambition, family, and the quest for purpose intertwine, shaping Jonathan's journey in unexpected ways. As the story unfolds, readers are left to ponder the open-ended possibilities that await Jonathan and his companions. Will they overcome the challenges that lie ahead, or will they succumb to the forces that seek to thwart their ambitions?

The title "Venusian" hints at the celestial backdrop against which the narrative unfolds, underscoring the grandeur of the journey that awaits. As readers journey alongside Jonathan, they are invited to explore the depths of human resilience and the boundless potential of the human spirit.

With each twist and turn of the plot, "Venusian" leaves readers on the edge of their seats, eagerly awaiting the next chapter in Jonathan's quest for meaning and fulfillment. In a world where the line between reality and fantasy blurs, the possibilities are endless, and the journey is just beginning.

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Maurice Vaughan

Great title and poster, Nathaniel Baker! I think your logline needs more info (the main character, storyline, and stakes).

Matthew Kelcourse

Hi Nathaniel Baker - sounds like a kool premise. Nice! However, IMO, a different beast than a logline. There's some great online stuff about creating a banger of a logline, including here at S32. Write on!

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Mark Deuce

Really love this premise Nathaniel Baker

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