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THE PINEAL PROJECT

THE PINEAL PROJECT
By Giovanni Furore

GENRE: Mystery, Drama
LOGLINE:

"After finding evidence that her twin sister is still alive, a woman will investigate where she is now, facing a fearsome religious sect headed by a celebrated media guru"

SYNOPSIS:

George Stark is the creator of the “Eden” community, which is at the origin of the more complex “The Pineal Project”, a kind of new religion with loyal followers around the world. The philosophy of the pineal project promises through the ingestion of special pills and a specific meditation the overcoming of the self and the perfection of the personality, promising the annihilation of one's fears and limitations. The “Edén” community is located on an exotic and unknown island, where all those who join it, after a short time, completely lose contact with their families and friends. Rumors about Stark begin to circulate and many are already questioning the new philosophy: but just when the parents of some missing boys ask to open an official investigation, a girl named Sara reappears in a fleeting video revealed to a journalist in which she explains that she is safe and sound, and that she is now finally living happily. In the video, which becomes a viral phenomenon, other people are also shown in the background. Among these Kathleen recognizes Vicky, her twin sister who died a few years earlier. Kathleen is a famous ex-drug addict DJ now remotely recruited by "The Pineal Project". The remote program includes a series of exercises with virtual reality and the ingestion of blue pills capable of bringing the person into an altered state of consciousness, where initiates can experience their fears and their past, as well as doing sessions directly. with George Stark in his "laboratory". Kathleen begins to have suspicions about the death of her sister: in her memories of her Vicky of her having died in a tragic accident in which she is haunted by the remorse of feeling guilty. But if Vicky is alive then Kathleen's memories are false and the truth is hiding right in the community of "Eden". The girl thus begins her own investigation, which initially will lead her to enter the sect of George Stark to delve into a terrible story in which his true past about her and terrible truths about her are hidden. George Stark was a well-known surgeon / psychiatrist, a human brain scholar who was carrying out some secret experimental projects on the pineal gland. The scientist, through his studies of ancient texts and hieroglyphs, thinks he knows that there is something beyond perceptible reality, where a higher divinity seems to have the fundamental answers. Stark realizes that the pineal gland is the only way (a kind of cosmic receiver) to make contact with this entity. Years later Stark founded "Eden", a community that advertises a second life through the suppression of fears, but in reality Eden is a place where Stark obsessively conducts his secret experiments on the "guinea pigs" that become part of it: those we have actually seen in the video, they are dead. Those images are just a "virtual reconstruction", because Stark is looking for those with certain genetic predispositions that can help him carry out his project on a new model of superman. Once inside "Eden", Kathleen will discover that she too has always been part of the diabolical project of Stark, who kidnapped her when she was just a child to make her one of the fundamental elements for the realization of her crazy plan.

Angela Cristantello

This is a REALLY good start! I would like to know a touch more about who the protagonist (right now, we just know that she's a woman who has a long-lost twin sister). It would also be helpful to find a cleaner more articulate way to say "will investigate where she is now"; is she reading up on things, working with the police, or taking everything on herself and leaving no stone unturned?

I've DMd you with something that might help :)

This is a really really solid start!

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