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In a dystopian future where the wealthy pay to transfer their diseases onto the poor, a desperate father sacrifices everything to save his dying son, only to discover that the procedure he trusted holds a dangerous secret that could topple the corrupt system built on exploitation.
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Premise is amazing Vital Butinar
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Thanks Mark Deuce. Yeah I was pretty psyched when a producer buddy of mine gave me a really great idea and I developed it pretty quickly of what I wanted it to be.
It actually opens with a commercial for a clinic. :D
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Well done Vital Butinar
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