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ARIAD
By Semra Michaels
In war with the gods, five friends fight for their souls in Hell's Labyrinth for the magical Amulet of Ariad, but find a shape-shifting evil goddess and the legendary Demigod Minotaur, in search of King Minos' Lost Treasure.
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I read it with interest, and I realize that your story has great potential! I wish you success and peace!
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I don't understand who is fighting with whom and for what. so many things. Try to highlight the main conflict.
From what I read in the logline, I would leave the following - in search of a magical amulet, five friends are fighting with mythical creatures in the labyrinth of hell.
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