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ALABAMA
By Nicole Jamison
A spirited southern belle is forced to go on a journey of self discovery and self forgiveness after losing her only sibling.
SYNOPSIS:
Eighteen year old ALABAMA is a southern belle living in beautiful Savannah GA, on a postcard worthy farm. Her younger sister GEORGIA'S childhood leukemia comes back, it rapidly takes her life. After her sister's death ALABAMA, depressed, takes refuge in her sister's bedroom. While grieving in her sister's bedroom ALABAMA finds a couple of letters that GEORGIA wrote describing the things she would like to accomplish when she gets out of the hospital. With the help of REID, ALABAMA finds her courage and sets out to fulfill her sister's last wishes.
Side note : We are now in post production of our ALABAMA proof of concept
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Somehow, you need to give more flavor and specifics to your "journey of self discover and self forgiveness"
Hey Brian Thanks for the feed back. Do you have any suggestion?
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Well Nicole, what's the one adjective that would make that "journey" flavorful?
In 2014, I made a similar roadtrip that I published into a book titled "Gratitude Miles" - it was a journey that revisited most of my past and to become a ghost to my past ghosts... grown, moved on, let go.
To describe your journey maybe reword your logline to a specific "on a journey of self-discovery as she fulfills her dying sister's bucket list. (so it has shades of The Terminal and The Bucket List in it)... something like that Nicole.
Thank you so much!