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"It is blood that gives us life
Flowing through the flesh & bone
Pumping With breath gone in death
Leaving the body cold as stone
The stain a red paint
Dripping down an eager Mouth
Sealed with a kiss a moment of bliss
Tingling sensation races south
The night is my domain
A bite just to sustain
The light in the darkness
Of time and space
As a vampire I shall remain"
Copyright 2016 Ashanti Altovese Griffin - All Rights Reserved
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this is good I like it your wording fits what you displayed a vampire I also like your make up job out of sight
Thank you Charlotte!