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A young man just starting his career as an archeologist is reluctantly comes back home to bury his Dad. But he has obligations, his father won't allow himself to be buried until the son agrees to take over the family business: a cemetery. Decay, ghosts, family grudges and even more death stand in the way of the son getting away alive.
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I like the idea, but this is not a logline. Imagine you are in an elevator with an EP, and you have less than 10 seconds to pitch your idea. Keep in mind that four words make a second.
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AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!
Jon Stout Hi Jon, I believe you inadvertantly left an "is" in the first sentence of your logline.