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A group of underground biochemists conduct illegal testing of an incurable flesh-eating virus on human subjects, until, one of the test subjects escapes. Now, three weeks later, a group of unlikely survivors team up to try and find a safe haven; but survival comes at a cost.
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How is everything, Brendan? I like the concept. The logline you have sounds more like a short overview or synopsis.
How about this for a new logline:
Three weeks after one of the human subjects escapes an underground lab where an incurable, flesh-eating virus was tested illegally, a group of unlikely survivors teams up to find a safe haven.
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Three weeks after one of the human subjects escapes an underground lab where biochemists conducted illegal testing of an incurable, flesh-eating virus, a group of unlikely survivors teams up to find a safe haven.
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