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WHERE WERE YOU WHEN THE LIGHTS WENT OUT?
By Stephen John Beyer
In July of 1977 during the Great New York City Black Out, an aspiring actress is chased by a masked killer who jeopardizes her way to fame.
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This is a fun start! A few things:
I don't think you need to include Linda's name in this ("aspiring actress" says plenty .... although, "a haggard/fresh-faced/pretentious/etc aspiring actress" could say even more). Also, the backdrop for this project is AWESOME, but right now, it feels like it's the only fresh and new thing in this story. What else about this piece is going to set it apart from other woman getting stalked by a masked man-horrors? We need to find ways to highlight some newness here. But! Man, this could be really cool. And again: I love love love love love when and where this is taking place.
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How does one request a script read --??