Okay, this is not only adorable and touching, but quite informative in such a short line. For example, we learn right away that the baby robin is a male. I love how you phrased the logline in fewer words than some of your other loglines. Plus, animation is great! Thanks for sharing.
Only question I have is, is there a conflict? Does keeping the robin alive improve their lives or prevent something bad from happening (other than the robin's death of course)? What are the stakes?
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Okay, this is not only adorable and touching, but quite informative in such a short line. For example, we learn right away that the baby robin is a male. I love how you phrased the logline in fewer words than some of your other loglines. Plus, animation is great! Thanks for sharing.
Thanks so much. I was told by a professional to put as much information in 1 or 2 sentences. It's a 9 page read. I hope you enjoy the story.
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Only question I have is, is there a conflict? Does keeping the robin alive improve their lives or prevent something bad from happening (other than the robin's death of course)? What are the stakes?