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Jeremy so wants to do the right thing and stand up for what he truly believes in even if it means being tormented by the biggest bullies in school. But with the help of his new friend, Margaret, and her Native American Grandfather, he soon learns that bravery and courage can make a superhero out of anyone – even a third grader.
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Logline has a max of 29 words. 25 is better. No character names How is this different than the rest of the superhero movies - Raising Dion for one which has the same concept.