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Inspired by true events, the story follows a highly trained airline security fight instructor as he begins a new career chasing a big-money contract. With the threat of returning home penniless, he blindly joins an organization in the business of recovering rich assets left behind after the war years. The operation is soon compromised by US Intelligence and a local crime gang wanting their share of the millions.
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It's a great logline, but perhaps needs to be a little shorter. My suggestion: "Inspired by true events. With the threat of returning home penniless, a highly trained airline security fight instructor blindly joins an organization in the business of recovering rich assets left behind after the war years. The operation is compromised by US Intelligence and a local crime gang wanting their share of the millions."
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