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During a sleepover, a teen girl and her three friends skip the rule of not staying out after the midnight hour, while being stalked by a psychopath.
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A teen girl named Daisy, stays overnight for a sleepover. Her friends Izzy, Riley and Juliana are enjoying their time taking pictures. The four girls decide to go to sleep. Daisy is woken up by a frantic Izzy, telling her that Julia is outside, noticing that it's almost midnight. A scared Riley returns to get the two girls. Outside, Izzy and Daisy look for Juliana, but they split up. Noticing something strange, Daisy rushes through the woods and finds an injured Juliana. Izzy and Riley carry Juliana to Daisy's truck but are greeted by the Man-Like Thing monster. The monster pulls Daisy further into the woods and leaves the three other girls alone.
A week later, A less caring Izzy returns to her life. That night, Izzy and her boyfriend Eli are making out. Eli leaves Izzy alone in his truck. Having to use the bathroom, Izzy leaves the truck but is greeted by a vengeful seeking Daisy, who wants to get even with Izzy for her cruelness. Izzy gives Daisy the win to be let go but is left with not knowing her fate. The next week, Daisy visits Riley. Riley apologizes for the prank that they pulled on her on her birthday. with no surprise because that's what Daisy knew about Izzy's pranking her friends on their birthdays. She informs her that the monster let her go that night and that's when she got even with Izzy. Leaving Riley with polaroid pictures of Izzy and Eli. Riley is shocked but knows she has messed with the wrong person.
Izzy and her parents move out of town. A defeated Izzy is followed by Daisy's younger sister, Maria. Maria waves at her, giving her a farewell.
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