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An old man does so hate to make a fuss, even when someone's life is at stake
SYNOPSIS:
The story centers on an old couple. We never see the wife apart from the
back of her head as she sits in a chair. She never speaks either. It is
the old man who does the talking and as he does we realise he's
suffering from demntia. He's been a little worried about his wife
becuause she isn't eating but doesn't really want to bother anyone about
this. Gradually we realise something is very wrong here. When a woman
comes rushing through the door and into their living room (who we might
assume is their daughter)our suspicions are confirmed. As a script, Fuss
tries to be as subtle as possible whilst allowing the reader to work
out what is actually going on. (3 pages)
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