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A jaded CEO takes on his own board when they refuse to let him retire. Their argument is simple, countless life saving operations and technical implants have rendered him corporate property.
SYNOPSIS:
Wallis Tyrone is old, incredibly old and is the most successful and
longest serving corporate president in human history. When he announces
his wish to retire however, the board have very different ideas and send
the company head lawyer to explain to him exactly why this isn't an
option. The countless operations and technoligcal implants over the
decades have rendered him the property of the corporation. In desperation
Tyrone tries to take his own life, leaping from his office's high rise
window. Yet he doesn't die and when he wakes up again he realises his
situation is now much, much worse than he could ever have imagined.
Interesting. Though, perhaps include an other reason than being there in eternity to want to quit... I bet there lies the juicy bits...
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Hi Nic/ Paivi, you're right- the logling needs work- thanks so much
And thanks again Nathianel
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