Logline is precise and grasping. And without telling much, it’s tantalizing.. I can imagine there will be a lot of interesting things in this script such as drama, fantasy, faith, and comedy! Well done.

Thank you Pattana!

And yes, you guessed right!

I just dropped the screenplay. Enjoy

Good Logline.

I'd give two suggestions. One: To sound like Sean Parker in The Social Network, remove the "the" of "the society" bit. Also, maybe enlighten us with a little semicolon description of what exactly a Oyinbo is so that we don't have to Google it.

Thanks Manson for your honest review. I'm super grateful