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Hidden away on a Small Island sixty miles west of mainland San Francisco, is the small Island of Sandy; where San Francisco District Attorney's family reside. When a devastating betrayal render his family to pieces, his Ex's life took a Powerful Political turn...
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When Faith, wife of San Francisco District Attorney Eric French, found herself reeling from betrayal, she sunk beneath the waves of despondency. With the help of her French Assistant and her seven year old daughter Katherine, an unexpected journey began. Her exquisite beach side residential mansion beneath the waves of Sandy Island welcomes sunrise and sunset of unparalleled beauty. With each passing day, Sunkist skies and unwavering tides beacon her back to life. Among the many people who adore Faith is her ever adorning Mother-in-law who would readily rebuke her own son to embrace Faith, whom she loves as her own daughter. In the midst of embracing everything she once excluded and re-evaluating the new meaning of her life, she was swept into a powerful political status and unseen world of Love Leadership and Politics.
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Kacee Diehl DeMassi Jealousy and lies are not constructive criticism... Quit wasting people's time with your garbage and move on. Everyone knows a great logline is all about the story-at the end of the day, a great story is what sells. Now please move on
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Kacee DeMassi lol
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You truly are an amazing writer!