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CRIME FIGHTING KARATE KOALA BEARS SEASON 1 EPISODE 8 RISE OF THE BAT MISTRESS
By Steven Gibson
Eucalypity is over runned by bats,all controlled by this lady known as the Bat Mistress. The Koalas have to fight off this new villain and get rid of all of the bats in Eucalypity.
SYNOPSIS:
When a new villain comes in to Eucalypity, releasing all of her bats all over town, the koalas go out to fight the new threat, but they also have to help Fluffy control her fear of bats.
CRIME FIGHTING KARATE KOALA BEARS SEASON 1 EPISODE 8 RISE OF THE BAT MISTRESS
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You might want to start by explaining who the koalas, the bat mistress, and fluffy are as right now it makes no sense whatsoever!
I wrote down episode 1 and 2 explaining who the koalas are.
It doesn't matter what you wrote in the episodes it only matters now how to write a great logline which explains the story idea and right now it does not - maybe research online what a logline contains and go from there
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Just to have you know that this is an episode. Do you think I have to introduce my characters in every episode script I do?
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