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The koala, S.P.D and Katelyn go help a boy named Billy Bills who was taken away by robots.
SYNOPSIS:
While having a fun day with Katelyn Reads and S.P.D, they were attacked by Bill Bots while a teenage boy named Billy Bills was running away with some blueprints that he stool from his Dad’s company.
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I LOVE your concept, but is this logline a true logline? This is really original and cool. For a logline, though... wouldn't it be a bit more? Something sorta like.... "When a young Billy Bills is abducted by aliens, a crime fighting karate koala bear and his team of crime fighting friends rush to rescue him."
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