I'd like to see the end product.

Thanks!

You're not too big on words.

What John is trying to say is that your logline is not finished. "Where do we see 'the goal of the protagonist'? 'What' is he going to do about his predicament? This story is about "how' the man handles the situation of the female robot getting out of controle.

Good call- I'll have to work on it some more. Thanks for your input! :)

Jackie Letkowski With just a little more clarity, I think this would be a five. Does the man find friendship and love with a robot that is programmed to murder him?