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Thanks for the rating, Robin Gregory!

Thank you, Maria Soriano!

Hey, Tim Bragg. What are you confused about?

Yes, the cookies, Matthew Kelcourse. Gingerbread Man knows people love cookies. Muahahaha

Not the Gingerbread Man taking 'bite me' to a whole new level!

Haha Jacqueline Sandee Valle. Great one.

Maurice Vaughan The logline is super playful and original. How far along are you on the screenplay? It feels like a spoof or comedy. For some reason, the title (the name of the department) doesn't carry the same feeling. What if the department (or special unit, title of special ops) directly related to cookies and police work? Like "Gingerbread Squad" or "Operation Cookie Monster" or "G is for Gingerbread Man." Something more specific?

Thanks, Robin Gregory. I'm done with the script. It's a short script. I'm pitching it in hopes that a producer, director, company, or actor buys it and turns it into a feature or show, like they do with short stories, articles, etc.

Thanks for the feedback. The Department of Fairy Tales is a secret government agency that keeps the existence of fairy tale characters a secret and pursues fairy tale criminals. Think "Men in Black" with Will Smith and Tommy Lee Jones.

Maurice. I am not confused, it is actually an original idea and it sounds fun after reading the synopsis. I posted before you had the synopsis up. I would read this, it sounds silly like Spaceballs.

I see you posted the script, I read it, it's interesting, I laughed over that line do you like fairytales and the response is as long as they are not criminals,

Thanks for rating my logline, Jacqueline Sandee Valle!

Thanks for rating and reading the script, Tim Bragg! I rewrote the script today. Small things here and there.

Thank you, Tasha Lewis!

Thanks for rating, Nate Rymer!

Thanks for the five stars, Hendrick W Lira!

Rated this logline *****

Thanks for the rating, Don McHaney! You can also rate my logline by clicking the stars if you like (beside "Avg Rating").

Thanks for rating my logline five stars, Benedict Sigma!

Thank you, Nathaniel Baker!

Thanks for the perfect rating, @John Snell!

Maurice Vaughan Mind Control Cookies! Love it! Wondering if a group of disaffected Girl Scouts could be in the sequel as a crack team of cookie mercenaries.

Thanks for the five stars and comment, @Lee! That's a great suggestion! That'd be fun to watch!

Thank you for the perfect rating, @Jody!

Thank you for the five stars, Jim Boston!

Thanks, Jim Boston!

I appreciate it, @Michael Dzurak!