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After moving into their new house, a closed-minded dad tries to get rid of a ghost roach that haunts him and his teenage daughter.
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Horror/Comedy short script for sale
Joe’s Apartment x Beetlejuice
Sub-genres: Contained Horror/Ghost
Budget: Micro
Synopsis: A closed-minded dad named Howard and his teenage daughter, Jill, move into their new house. That night, Ghost Roach wakes up and haunts them. Howard tries different ways to get rid of the roach, but nothing works. After saying no a thousand times – not really – Howard lets Jill try her idea to get rid of the roach, and it works. Ghost Roach moves on to the afterlife.
Potential: Feature script and/or series (TV, web, or limited)
Thanks for hearing my pitch. Message me on Stage 32 or email me with any questions.
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Thanks for five stars, Billy Kwack!
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Hi Maurice, are you still working on this or it's finished?
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The script's finished, Billy Kwack.
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Alright, here we go—let’s dig into this! A ghost roach haunting a dad & daughter? That got layers! Beyond the laughs, I see a mirror for transformation. A closed-minded dad, challenge by the impossible, forced to open his mind—or at least try. I can just imagine him facing off with this little undead critter, wrestling with more than just bug spray.
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Hi Maurice, do you have any plans with your screenplay?
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Thanks for rating and commenting, Mista Martel! Yep, that's how it goes down in the script. The dad doesn't use bug spray though (I thought about using spray in the script).
I'm pitching the script, Billy Kwack. I outlined and wrote the script as one of my November Write Club goals.
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Thank you, Tasha Lewis!
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Thanks for rating, Nate Rymer!
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Thanks for five stars, Jim Boston!