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WET
By Maurice Vaughan
Stuck on a float during a major storm, an impulsive teenager with a deadly water allergy tries to leave the pool without getting wet as her dad and her best friend help.
SYNOPSIS:
Thriller short script for sale
It’s water to you. It’s death to her.
Sub-genres: Contained Thriller/Survival Thriller
Budget: Micro
Synopsis: Adria, an impulsive teenager with a deadly water allergy, walks along her dad’s pool and almost falls into the water. Her scientist dad, Edward, chews her out. As Edward leaves for work, he tells Adria to stay inside because a small storm is approaching. Adria secretly sets up a pool party with her best friend, Liv. While Adria is on a float, the small storm becomes major. She tries to leave the pool without getting wet, but she nearly falls into the water. Her dad gets home early and freaks out when he sees her on the float. Edward and Liv help Adria get off the pool without her getting wet. Edward invents a pill that cures Adria’s allergy.
Potential: Feature script
Thanks for hearing my pitch. Message me on Stage 32 or email me with any questions.
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Thanks for the perfect rating, Tasha Lewis 2!
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Thanks for rating, Nate Rymer.
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Thanks for the five stars, William Gunn!
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Quite the unique twist here: a water allergy as the key factor deciding a character's fate.
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Thanks, Marcel Jr.! I was looking for a fresh angle for a script and realized that I haven't seen a movie where the main character was allergic to water to this degree. I'm thinking about turning this into a feature script.
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Thanks for the four stars, Michael Dzurak!
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Thank you, Abdusamad Shafiev!
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Darn it, when we thought the pool would be safe. We have to see if she makes it!!!
Thanks, Ron Reid! The pool's not safe for Adria. Drinking water/etc. without a straw, sweating, etc. aren't safe for her either.
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Thanks for welcoming me. Adore the simplicity and constant potential for suspense in adolescence lived out loud. Impulsive and unpredictable, yet desperate for the comfort of knowing their parents are close enough to comfort and then restore calm. Spot on Maurice. Enjoy your contributions very much BTW. :)
You're welcome, @Adelaide. Thank you! I really appreciate your comment! I'm thinking about turning this short script into a feature script. We'll see. Hope you have success on Stage 32!
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Thanks for rating, Jim Boston!