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The new world order, has begun.
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SYNOPSIS:
What if all the events happening in the world were part of a conspiracy to provoke the rise of a new world order?
This is the experience of Eider, a brilliant university student at Oxford with a high IQ, who is tracked by the U.S. Secret Service to be recruited as a spy. Burack and Sam, two seasoned agents in the Secret Service, are tasked with training Eider in the world of espionage. Eider discovers the world of telecommunications and the end of human privacy.
On the other hand, Jeon works for the Asian Secret Service, which pursues the same goal as the U.S. Secret Service. The global elite, self-named "the Red Circle" and led by Won, have sinister plans to establish a new world order.
Jeon designs and executes a plan to uncover the true intentions of the Red Circle. However, his plan is discovered, and he is pursued by the elite's security. Unable to escape with the information, Jeon dies while fleeing. The security searches Jeon but finds nothing. The location of the information Jeon obtained remains a mystery.
While Burack is in the hospital after an attack, Sam and Eider learn what happened to Jeon and embark on a race against time to find the stolen information before the global elite do. Thus begins a frantic competition between Sam and Eider to obtain the information that reveals the elite's plans, and the elite themselves to recover it before their wicked plans are exposed. These plans include ruling the world, provoking a shift in global hegemony, creating a single global government, a single economy, and even their own religion by falsifying Vatican doctrines and provoking apostasy.
The elite have already begun to implement their plan, using various crises and global events to destabilize the economy of the world's most powerful country and start weakening it.
With Burack recovered, Eider and Sam must act quickly to prevent the outbreak of World War III and stop the rise of the new world order.
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This sounds very interesting and your movie poster is great! The logline should only be one sentence. Your synopsis needs to be shortened to approximately 3 paragraphs. A treatment can be 1-3 pages to tell more. There may be other suggestions. Some treatments may be up to 15 pages after they read the 3-page. Fellow Stage 32 members, please help with your suggestions also.
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Jessica Rose Thank you very much for your time and your opinion!!!!
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Wow. This sounds very exciting my friend. Best of luck with this!
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Amazing Alejandro Marello and you really need to translate this into English as well. Cheers!
Mark Deuce : I hadn't realized that. (My mistake) I'll do it right away. Thank you very much for the advice