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GLASS STARS
By Katharyn King
SYNOPSIS:
Lily Rhodes leads the Avatar team at Futura Industries in the year 2152. Whilst installing a patch due to a recent security breach in the mainframe, a catastrophic failure occurs which results in the obliteration of more than half the human population. Now she must race to figure out what to do as the world is plunged into panic, chaos and death. WGA West Registration #: 2102864
GLASS STARS
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I like this idea, but I think the logline is only half the info you need. Consider adding the goal of the coder and the stakes if they don't succeed, to make it more compelling.
Thank you!
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Love it! I want to see this movie based on log line. If I'd say anything - maybe instead of top coder - add something unique to main character that feels personal. Great idea though.
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