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SYNOPSIS:
Lila Crown’s husband, Dylan, still wreaks havoc on her from within the confines of a psychiatric hospital. She cannot seem to escape his terrifying grasp. Lila relives every harrowing moment of abuse and torture by her abusive cop husband until one day she finally escapes by killing him, only to find herself permanently committed. Now she must fight for a fresh start as well as her sanity.
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Hi, Katharyn King. I think the logline needs a goal. The end of the synopsis says, "Now she must fight for a fresh start as well as her sanity." Is that her goal in the story?
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