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GALAXY HOUNDS
By Sam M Smith

GENRE: Thriller, Sci-fi
LOGLINE: Abducted by a derelict starship, intergalactic police officer Lance Cloud is tasked with destroying travel gates to prevent an apocalypse—which puts him firmly in the crosshairs of his former friends.
Maurice Vaughan

Sounds like an exciting Animation/Action story, Sam M Smith! Love the title.

I think the logline needs some work. Here's a suggestion (a very rough suggestion Haha):

"Stranded after being ambushed on a mission, a _______ (adjective) Galactic Bloodhound gets rescued by the Federation's enemies. ________ (something like "Now in the company of pirates"), he ________ (goal of story) to ________ (stakes)."

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