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Sam M Smith
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GALAXY HOUNDS
By Sam M Smith

GENRE: Thriller, Sci-fi

LOGLINE: Abducted by a derelict starship, intergalactic police officer Lance Cloud is tasked with destroying travel gates to prevent an apocalypse—which puts him firmly in the crosshairs of his former friends.

Maurice Vaughan

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- Sabrina Miller
- Sam M Smith
2 years ago

Sounds like an exciting Animation/Action story, Sam M Smith! Love the title.

I think the logline needs some work. Here's a suggestion (a very rough suggestion Haha):

"Stranded after being ambushed on a mission, a _______ (adjective) Galactic Bloodhound gets rescued by the Federation's enemies. ________ (something like "Now in the company of pirates"), he ________ (goal of story) to ________ (stakes)."