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GATE GUARD
By Matthew Walsh

GENRE: Action
LOGLINE:

On his first day working security at a secret research facility, an ex-con must endure a cat and mouse game with an assassin trying to expose the company for the shocking human experiments they are performing.

SYNOPSIS:

This story follows James Wright, a former Special Forces member in the U.S. Army and ex-con, as he starts his first day on security detail at a covert research facility. James is our lead protagonist with a storied past. He lost his brother in combat and then subsequently went to jail for stealing medication for his niece. Now, he has a chance to start over, thanks to this job given to him by his sister-in-law who works at research facility.

The core plot of the story revolves around an assassin that breaks into the research facility and starts to kill all of the security guards on his way to his objective. James is tasked with finding and killing the infiltrator. When James catches him, however, the assassin tells James the shocking truth about what they do at the research facility. James then teams up with the assassin to take down the evil corporation before they can do any more harm.

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Amazing Kacee

too many words - also the characters do not make sense first you start with a security guard, who is the ex-con then? and an assassin kills people they arent into politics. You do not need this sentence. On his first day working security at a secret research facility.

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