Thank you Nathaniel! I appreciate the very generous review :)

This is a very cool idea I'm not sure how to do the stars but I would give it 5.

Thank you BL Gabriel , it looks like you gave me 5 stars :)

Yes, this is an incredibly interesting story and I was amazed that Hollywood had not done a better job of capturing the story (handful of not-great old-movies). I'm looking forward to seeing how this fares in the competitions I've submitted it to, to include @stage32's Drama competition.

Matthew this logline does not reveal anything about the story. What you have written would be more appropriate for marketing your movie, once it has been produced.

Good point Adam Jestin, I think I overlooked establishing the key features of a traditional logline and I instinctively went simple since this script is based on already existing IP/history.

I'll definitely write a better/actual logline. I appreciate you pointing that out.

Agree with Adam. But extremely promising as something Hollywood would want to produce.