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REPOSSESSED
By Sasha Tomas
A Latina tow-truck driver repossesses a Ferrari and picks up a ghost and the wrath of a notorious drug-dealer.
SYNOPSIS:
The trials and tribulations of Lupe Luna, a 30-year-old Puerto Rican woman stuck at her familia's struggling mechanic shop who wants more from life but has to deal with spirits that seek her help to resolve their murder so that they can cross over. How can she help them when she can barely help herself?
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This sounds like it's going to be funny, Sasha Tomas.
You have the protagonist, inciting incident, and antagonist in the logline, but you're missing the driver's goal in the story and the stakes. Here's a logline suggestion: "After a Latina tow-truck driver repossesses a Ferrari and picks up the wrathful ghost of a notorious drug-dealer, she _________ (goal of story) to ________ (stakes)."
Or you could put the inciting incident at the end of the logline: "A Latina tow-truck driver _________ (goal of story) to ________ (stakes) after repossessing his Ferrari."
You could replace "wrathful" with "enraged" if you want.
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