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They meet. They fall in love. They don't get together. Are they fighting 'fate' - or better off with something different?
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A romantic dramedy spanning the decades and explores the power of loyalty and friendship vs romantic love.
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Hi, Jessica. For a logline, you want something like: "After ______ (something happens), a _______ (the protagonist with an adjective) must _______ (goal of story) so ________ (stakes)."
Example: "After a group of dog criminals arrives in a small town, an impulsive dog sheriff must defend a dog treat factory so they won't steal food that's meant for hungry dog families."
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Thanks for the feedback guys. It's a two-hander, so I don't have the perfect logline down yet. The protagonists goals change in a surprising way, and the story structure is more of an epic as it covers a lifetime - not a hero's journey. Tricky one to logline.
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Indeed! Awesome Rohit, I'll check it out. Thanks.
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