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DOMESTIC SPY
By BL Gabriel
A naïve, teenage girl living an idyllic existence in the 1960s learns there is more to life than meets the eye when she stumbles upon a book about Russian spies and fears her mother may be the author. In search of her mother’s true identity, she discovers who she really is.
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So appreciate your encouragement!
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I revised this because I remembered the late Blake Snyder (save the cat) telling me "the good news is I want to know what happens next; the bad news is it's not in the logline!"
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hello! It's a good idea, but there's no drama in the logline. A teenage girl from a prosperous family suspects that her mother is a foreign spy. she begins a dangerous investigation that risks destroying strong family relationships, and possibly putting the whole family in mortal danger.