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A deadbeat stoner dies and wakes up in purgatory to discover his long-lost grandpa is a mafia Don who runs the afterlife. Now he must earn his way into heaven while helping his grandpa save the family business.
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I think this is an amazing! It's definitely an original and I think you a lot can be done with this. In giviing a critique, what if instead of it being the, "After Life," it was Purgatory? I think that would be pretty cool, but either way I think it's a fantastic idea. Great Job!
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Melanie Evans thanks so much. It is actually purgatory but a lot of religions don't call it that. In order to cover all religions, which this show tries to, I called it afterlife to make it more broad. Thanks for your input!
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